Workshop: The Concept from Hell

As a general rule, I don't like it when people critique my work. I like for them to praise me as a genius, say everything is perfect, and be done with it. However, like every person, I am not perfect. There is always room to improve in my work. I am taking a fiction writing class this semester, and today my story was one of the ones torn apart by the masses. It's called "At His Parents' Gravesite", but I don't care for the title, so I'm going to scrap it. I suck at titles, so suggestions are welcome. I'll put the story up here when I'm done with the changes. I hope by then it will be spectacular.